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'Hidden Beauty'

you were that diamond in the rough the one they never noticed until you started to shine, your hidden beauty became the one thing everybody noticed precisely at the time you decided to shut the world out they sat up and took note they finally saw you

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  1. Date: 3/30/2014 5:27:00 PM
    Good poem. I am a sucker for love poems.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 1:55:00 AM
    ...they sat up and took note... I'm taking note, too, hidden beauty!

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:20:00 AM
    I love this poem Wilma! keep writing

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 2:44:00 PM
    just awesome - love it! Hope you're having a great weekend lfde

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 6:41:00 PM
    Thy inner beauty reads so true to the world. :o)

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 11:20:00 PM
    Wilma, this is beautiful! It's funny how things that begin to shine will create lots of new light! Thanks for sharing your words. Take care...

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:32:00 PM
    Was it too late or just in time Wilma; the mystery knaws at me as the story is too shy to come on strong. Love the way you tease the reader! LoveLizzie

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Who is it?!!? Who is it??! lol:-) A very profound and interesting poem,a real gem it is-and so are you Wilma! Have a great Cape Town weekend,CTC:) Thanks for dipping into my soup bowl too;-) ps! love your new avatar toooo!!! Sending you a few words later my friend.Take care and have a great Friday:) Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 5:04:00 AM
    This is beautiful Wilma, i'm curious to know who it is.........

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:08:00 PM
    time to fully shine, wilms.. a lovely piece that unfurls with inner reflection.. like, like!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:49:00 AM
    btw, is it just me or are there now Ads by google? Above and bleow the comments section? Quite distracting o_O

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:47:00 AM
    What a very inspiring poem this is, Missy---I think so many people are these "hidden beauties"-- how wonderful it is when they are unearthed, so to speak-- thanks as well for passing by my poem, hmm can't say exactly that I am happy that you can relate to it, but I am glad you liked it! Mwahugs and also enjoy your day--- 14 mins and counting... my connection is slowwww.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:54:00 AM
    wow, I LOVE this, Wilma. One of your best "shortie" poems. Full of meaning!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:12:00 PM
    Yes been in that chair before, I think that chair has my name on it lol. You spill such deep feelings with such a tender loving voice. Hence why you are Cape Town Honey. Love and two kisses , one on your cheek the other on the other. :•) MJF

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:34:00 PM
    Right, Wilma. When you got it, then persevere. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:27:00 PM
    So very true, Wilma. So many are not able to 'shut the world out', and the world never gets to see the real "you". Insightful write! Much love, Annalise

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 11:39:00 AM
    ooh Wilma this is very good, anyone we know?...David

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 9:54:00 AM
    philosophical write, well penned, enjoyed!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Not to be noticed until it no longer matters and one has stopped caring...a too common situation, often with regrettable results. This is an insightful and well-composed piece that I enjoyed reading.

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Wilma I loved you Peom! you are so talented! Best, Omneya