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Hi Nice

My name is heartbreak, I like you You are so nice, could you make me some rice and also some juice You are really nice, I stabbed you with a knife, crumbling your whole life But you still smile, you are so forgiving I want to do it again! Hi nice, my name is hurt, you are my favorite I burnt you, I talked behind your back I even talked infront of your face, all the things you didn't want to hear Your tears are a joy to me, oh the pleasure I get Your tears are so beautiful You can't even look at me What's wrong, are you that weak? Of course! I want us to be friends forever Good morning nicey nice, remember me? Your sweet friend of the dark, the nightmare! You bring lots of smiles to me Sometimes I wish I could step on you harder, jump on you with all my strength I just like to see you break You fill me You feel me? Come here my dear friend, the rollercoaster is not over Good evening miss Nice, how's your day going I wish I could get into your mind and find that inner switch Twist your brainless switch, find that little hope you live on I have some "great" things I could do it You know me, I don't care I want to see you gone If only I could snap my finger and make you disappear And then reappear. ..I could do that a million times just to torture you as much as I can Goodnight nice I know you are thinking of rebelling You are awake every night planning on your escape plans You don't want to be soft anymore, you want to stand up for yourself, you want to speak your mind... Sorry sister, between me and you, you will never succeed So keep dreaming! !!

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Date: 8/26/2015 9:14:00 PM
.....but nice always wins, broken but never beaten. Whatever winter throws, Spring follows. great write, njeri, keep smiling, Viv x
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/31/2015 5:49:00 AM
Very encouraging words. Thank you Viv.
Date: 8/25/2015 10:33:00 AM
A beautiful and an eloquent write, this is very great and sad; suffocation of nose of whoever want to breath out success....excellence.........A.M.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/31/2015 5:47:00 AM
Thank you A.M. i appreciate the comment
Date: 8/25/2015 3:04:00 AM
Very brave to reveal an internal dialogue but done so well. Sad that it seemed that heartbreak got the upper hand after a promising fight back but personal acceptance boundaries can soon get that demon on a short leash. Kind regards, Ian
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/31/2015 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Ian. Being a people pleaser and nice all the time can be hurtful sometimes especially when there are people who take advantage of that.

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