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He's the One

I've waited so long, And hated,so hard Then came,a bright ray Of sunshine,and their he was.. It felt so right,the way, He held me..soo tight With warmth in his heart. His eyes as blue as the sky And he had this sparkle, So bright in his eyes. I knew he would make it to me, I waited so long, And hated so hard , I fell in love,I've waited for this day, I knew that he was the one.. The butterflies... When he touches my skin, And looks into my eyes.I get This rush..inside,that doesn't Go away..ive waited for this day He's the man of my dreams.. And I'm not alone,I always knew He would come rescue me, That would take this hurt and pain Away from me...and now I have him, Here..to take away my tears, To make us happy..For the rest Of my years.....he's the one!!!

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Date: 9/20/2016 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful heartfelt poem Patricia:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/25/2016 2:33:00 PM
Its filled with emotions... Great poem...
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:01:00 PM
An onion is given for some lovers, A thorny rose for happy others. A cross to be followed by people:many; A cup of bitterness and a drop of honey: You re-lived no time in beauty`s rhymes.
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Date: 3/8/2016 6:20:00 PM
This is nice... I bet you're in love..
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Date: 2/29/2016 2:29:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Patricia :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:38:00 PM
Patricia,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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