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He's Looking

At first he is struck by her beauty and grace; But then he is puzzled by the look on her face. The look that she has says just go away; Don't bother me now it's not a good day. As the look that he sees slowly slips by; He thinks he can see her in his minds eye. She seems held down by rules that boggle her brain; Trapped in a web known as anger and pain. A beautiful creature locked in a cage; She stands alone up on a stage. She touches his heart he wants to reach out; But too many improprieties hang all about. For him to befriend her is a hopeless desire; So he stands to watch as she sinks in the mire. He knows he can see her but he acts like he don't; He wishes he knew her but he knows that he wont. He's helpless to help her no way to reach out; Save one simple offer he wished he could shout. Who ever you are what ever is true; There is one who noticed, he's looking at you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 11/17/2012 3:37:00 PM
I love this so much It's so beautiful I love it :)
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Leonard Taormina
Date: 11/20/2012 4:25:00 AM
Thank you skyler; so happy to have touched you :)
Date: 11/17/2012 8:39:00 AM
Very touching write. We all are the same. We all need someone to care, a hand stretched is all that is needed. Thanks for sharing Leonard.
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