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Hershey Dreams (Multiple Haiku)

HERSHEY DREAMS (multiple Haiku) a chocolate craze oh don’t even wipe your chin every drop counts there is some great news - calorie-free chocolate cool stud! in your dreams have a hershey bar every bite ecstasy don’t count calories when it’s cold outside save me a place by the fire serve hot chocolate “i want chocolate” “shut up and eat your salad!” “the bunny ate it”

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 10:25:00 PM

mmmm loving this one once again..Daver, visiting a few of your poems tonight... always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2010 11:20:00 PM

YUMMY!!! and wow, I can't believe I had ever overlooked chocolate haiku!!! A nice find! lUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/11/2010 5:24:00 AM

a romp through ch(if you have a book in print to sell, let me know in a comment section of a poem of mine? I'm posting where to buy them in a blog. I'm trying to get us some sales for the Holidays)Light & Love! oc O late! mmmm

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/8/2010 3:31:00 AM

Totally enjoyed this one too Dave :) haha now you got me carving for chocolate!! You betcha that I don't count calories, even more so when it comes to chocolate!! -- yummy series of haiku --nikko :)

Date: 8/15/2010 9:24:00 AM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for the day brightener. Fun way to share the struggle many have. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2010 12:18:00 AM

Daver, nice and yummy. Who can say no to your poem. I never had a Hershey Dream I love your poem. You sound like a baby in your first haiku, with the chocolate on the chin. Calorie free chocolate..WHAT!!! no way..lol. and the passion just to eat that candy bar mm mm!!!LOL,, I am glad that bunny ate the salad.. No I want my chocolate,,.Loved it Daver,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 3:18:00 PM

My dear, you bring out the chocoholic in me. Keep telling yourself, "It's said to be good for my heart" and you'll enjoy it with less guilt. The phenylethylamine in chocolate actually makes you feel a bit high...maybe high enough to think bunnies ate your salad. So funny, my friend! Love it and you! Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 8/13/2010 5:58:00 PM

YOU HAVE ME SMILING, DAVER:) U SURE R A SWEET POET. VERY CUTE, I LOVE THE ECSTASY MMMMMMMMMMMM TO THE BUNNY NOT THE SALAD. OI I DON'T LIKE COUNTING MY CALORIES*LUV~SKAT

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/13/2010 11:08:00 AM

You show off you :) just kidding, love your haiku, a form I have great difficulty grasping, don't ask me why hehe.. Don't laugh, love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2010 9:13:00 AM

Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Daver. ~Yummy~ Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/12/2010 9:03:00 PM

Enjoyed the multiple haikus, Daver

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/12/2010 4:30:00 PM

goin campin' next wk w/my two vegetarians!....good werds ta remember! my friend! jimbo

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/12/2010 3:49:00 PM

funny one Dave!! I got your joke i your comment by the way---you had to milk it for all it was worth! LOL

Diiamond Rich

Date: 8/12/2010 11:19:00 AM

Enjoyed this piece of poetry this afternoon and will definantly have to read more from you. Have a great day and these gems coming.