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Here In Paradise

Marmalade drips from the sky, and all around me, the world is awash in vibrant orange splendor splashed with yellow gold Here in Paradise where graceful palms lean toward dipping sun I dip my toes into the liquid amber of the tide. As if to catch the day’s last rays, I embrace radiance as it embraces me. Far off in the distance, the stretch of mountains on a neighboring island cradles what remains of the sinking sun. I have now waded out into the sea. . . my eyes savor the sky’s color of sweet marmalade and below it, water’s warm honeyed gold lapping softly at my shoulders. Suddenly a swarm of swooping wings bursts from the heavens! My eyes now feast on hundreds and hundreds of dark wheeling gulls, stark against the bright sky - the marmalade sunset’s surprise finale. For A Place Called Beautiful Contest of Janis Thompson

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Date: 1/8/2016 11:42:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:40:00 AM
Cool Poem! Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:30:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea this poem really has got the WOW factor for me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:17:00 AM
Andea, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:06:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:05:00 AM
Awesome Andrea, congratulations on your win in Shadow's contest ;) love it
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:04:00 AM
Hi, Andrea, I love sunsets and with this poem you put me there. So descriptive! Congrats on your top win. ~~Darlene
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Date: 7/25/2015 4:28:00 AM
WOW, what a description with a nice little surprise at the end! I must have been a dolphin in another life because I LOVE the ocean...You're the best my friend! - Tim
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:13:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations you top win:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2015 7:42:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:32:00 PM
Nicw win... Love SKAT
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:31:00 PM
WOW! Now, THAT was beautiful! Such a special piece ... Congratulations!!!
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:21:00 PM
So beautiful the imagery is elegant. Congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:07:00 PM
Beautiful and lovely piece,Andrea...Congrats on your splendid win. It is well deserving....
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea: Immersed me in one of my favorite time's of day.....sunrise is the other. Something magical in the atmosphere of endings and beginnings. SuZ
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:02:00 PM
The imagery is AMAZINGGGGGGGG wow wow wow i can see this so vividly in my minds eye - congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:58:00 AM
Congrats on 1st place win, Andrea. Not surprising. While reading your poem, I found the colors and scenery playing out in front of my eyes. Beautiful. I wished I was there. You are definitely a master of imagery. :) Janece
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:12:00 AM
Beautiful. Deserved win, Andie! I love the marmalade drips from the sky Congratulations! hugs!
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Date: 7/24/2015 10:04:00 AM
this outstanding poem blew me away Andrea so warm and sensual a masterpiece congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:07:00 PM
Andrea, I knew I would like this just by the title, so very beautiful, I love the painted sky/poem look. Very sorry to hear of your cat's cancer, such a terrible thing, illness and loss. Hugs.
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Date: 9/23/2013 9:08:00 PM
Enjoying the golden sunset. But darn it is getting cold in the evenings. love phyl
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Date: 8/26/2013 6:55:00 PM
Oh, seems that word has to used once more Petal, Congratulations. Great title as well. Nothing on mine for you so don't bother looking lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 8/20/2013 9:13:00 PM
hi Andrea, you always do so well in contest..congrats... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/20/2013 10:17:00 AM
A leisurely enjoyment of a lovely sunset. Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:44:00 AM
I'm luxuriating in the beauty of this poem, Andrea. Congrats on your marvelous win! You have all the elements that I love encapsulated here....water, sun, palm trees, and the sweetness of apricot marmalade! Incredible! :) Thanks for your lovely post on my poem, On Silly Childish Stickers! I responded to your post and answered your questions! Hugs!!!
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