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Here Comes Spring

Here Comes Spring They sit, waiting, fluffed birds on cold perch, eyes pinched against winter’s harsh white in defiance of the season’s bitter curse holding still night’s frail and icy light. Blanketed beneath soft downy quilt potential undisturbed in earthen tomb awaiting subtle shift of solstice tilt to bathe in chilling waters flowing womb. Awakened they push toward warming sun soft buds that trumpet beauty’s soft reply that Spring will see the nests and webs redone nature’s essence seduce the butterfly. The spinning color wheel of flowered glee the scents and sounds of that we cannot see. 2/21/2015 Submitted – Flower Song – Poetry contest sponsor –Rick Parise

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Date: 4/2/2015 9:44:00 AM
Charming, flowing lines, John...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:47:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2015 7:47:00 AM
John, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with this beautifully written poem, a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/28/2015 10:10:00 PM
this one really sets the stage for what is to come, John. VEry nicely done. Congrats on your win. I see you did not put your name on this one and wonder why sometimes I see your name in my contests. That is why I disqualify you. Just wanted you to know that for next time you might enter one of my contests!! Thanks for your sweet comments on my poems.
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Date: 3/28/2015 2:03:00 PM
Enchanting...love the last two lines the best. Congratulations! Kim :)
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2015 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 3/28/2015 1:44:00 PM
A beautiful Flower Song poem, John, with nice images of Spring's progression. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 3/28/2015 1:53:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, we finally got a little warmth and melting and signs of MUD.
Date: 2/24/2015 2:41:00 PM
A prelude to Spring and its awakening beauty sang in verses suprime! Excellent dear, john!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/24/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Demetrios. As they say "Hope SPRINGS eternal...."
Date: 2/22/2015 11:33:00 AM
i am filled with delight by the gaiety and mood of your enchanting piece, john.. you flow!.. huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 2/22/2015 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Nette, high praise coming from one who writes so eloquently, so frequently.

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