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Here, I Give the Night To You

Here, I give the night to you, standing out this whispered eve Crested in a halo’s glowing, amethyst of subtle glance Verses blank in quite dark, on a wayward path you climb Carving long a timed horizon, hovering above the land Take this place in canvassed plea, use the brush of nature’s hand Swath the timid starlit friction, setting flame to hidden dreams Captured breaths in echoed sighs, flowing flesh in silhouette Dancing beams of two step wisdom, long a shroud of taken way Beacons swarm poetic form, harvest cheers its glad response Shine this space our moon of autumn, here, I give the night to you 11/15/16 For: Shooting Blank Verse – poetry contest Sponsor: John Lawless P.S. This is my first attempt at Blank Verse and I am not sure I got it right, so hopefully I am close.

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Date: 12/3/2016 4:44:00 AM
Right or not, it is a beautiful poem, whatever the outcome may be :) Good luck in the contest
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Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2016 9:59:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren, this was my first attempt at blank verse and I wasn't too sure if I got it right. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/17/2016 6:15:00 AM
You had me at 'amethyst of subtle glance' and since I wouldn't know iambic pentameter if I tripped over it, you have my vote, very lovely Chris! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/17/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Paloma, that makes two of us.
Date: 11/15/2016 3:02:00 PM
- A wonderfully beautiful poem, Chris! - A 7 - Best wishes and good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thanks so very much Anne-Lise. I am grateful for your kind words today.
Date: 11/15/2016 2:55:00 PM
Oh the moon will shine upon the night you.give to her...and all the sky will glow..revealing those dreams and wishes hidden in the stars... Love your poem.Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thanks you so much my sweet friend. I guess where you are the moon and stars are glistening in the heavens. Your kindness is an amazing gift.
Date: 11/15/2016 2:36:00 PM
such a wistful piece of work, chris...reminds me of the song, ' nearness of you..'.. . huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette for your kind thoughts. I appreciate your visit.

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