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Luscious Summer

She drifts lusciously --- eyes tracing a window filled with orange stars where rows of flowers bend into a dance, summer reflects who i am through midnight hours relishing the deep flavor of moon. And she combs midnight into her hair nourishing the moon so a cycle could rush into the sea radiant as those arms then to whisper upon sapphire winds before crowning herself an ocean, just like me, potent and free whie she drifts so lusciously. Self-Portrait Contest Of Frank Herrera by nette onclaud

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/30/2013 9:14:00 AM

I feel the fullness of this art, Nette....like a sweet lullaby....seems to fill the room with blossoms....jimbo

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 5:26:00 PM

Congratulations.... tasting her own moment...totally perfect.....

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/23/2013 7:17:00 AM

Beautifully unique...I love it, Nette.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2013 7:25:00 PM

As beautiful as the poet herself!! Loveliness exudes from this piece!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 6:38:00 PM

Nette , :-) congratulations with your awesome "SELF PORTRAIT" poem. Take Care ~ PD

James Peranteau

Date: 4/22/2013 11:30:00 AM

A portrait engrossing this reader dear poet, and one who is eager to read your write prior to this Nette ! I can't wait to read it, its title is captivating my friend....so off I go to read it !!!!! *smiles* Have a great day my friend....much love, james

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/22/2013 5:15:00 AM

Well, I can well see that, she is indeed a luscious beauty:) Jag

Kash Poet

Date: 4/22/2013 1:48:00 AM

Wow!This is amazing Nette.What a self portrait you have penned here.Love it!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/22/2013 1:09:00 AM

A marvelous writing enriched with such inspiring expressions that no heart can ever remain unmoved! Highest marks! Thank you!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/22/2013 1:09:00 AM

A marvelous writing enriched with such inspiring expressions that no heart can ever remain unmoved! Highest marks! Thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2013 4:59:00 PM

Interesting self-portrait that you have penned for the contest..Reads like an interesting work for Frank to read..Thanks for the honor of your presence at my work..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 4/21/2013 4:44:00 PM

lovely write, Nette - good to see you back here : )

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/21/2013 3:24:00 PM

A stunning piece! The self-reflection here is wonderfully stated. Life has taught you well. :) Great job!

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/21/2013 2:46:00 PM

And she does drift quite lusciously my friend! This is an illustrious and masterful poem! You have been entertaining the free verse lately and I must say that it suits you and your style, however your rhyming poetry is very good as well! You have introduced me into many rhyming forms and I have been writing them ever since, and quite happily I might add! I've been improving ever since! I feel I'm a better poet because of you! Thank you for that Nette! What a wondrous piece this is! Great Work!!