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HER OWN MOMENT

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HER OWN MOMENT

She drifts lusciously --- eyes tracing a window filled with orange stars where rows of flowers bend into a dance, summer reflects who i am through midnight hours relishing the deep flavor of moon. In the stillness of dusk when all boughs turn to virtues and sins deepening the fragrance of airbrushed sky, she will find her own moment on a caravan of roses in the shade--- while the breeze climbs on her pores stirring the glow of fireflies blazed. Oh how she blooms more daring than mist of spring, flitting like a woman whose spirit enters inside my navel; much like the glaze she was born from, summer raises her tanned arms... fluid, raw, loving; then, to explode into an awakened flight shading the contours of July's bright pastels, her feverish way of tasting her own moment i see myself in her spontaneous flow as she drifts lusciously. Self-Portrait Contest Of Frank Herrera by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:14:00 AM
    I feel the fullness of this art, Nette....like a sweet lullaby....seems to fill the room with blossoms....jimbo

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 5:26:00 PM
    Congratulations.... tasting her own moment...totally perfect.....

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Beautifully unique...I love it, Nette.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:25:00 PM
    As beautiful as the poet herself!! Loveliness exudes from this piece!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Nette , :-) congratulations with your awesome "SELF PORTRAIT" poem. Take Care ~ PD

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:30:00 AM
    A portrait engrossing this reader dear poet, and one who is eager to read your write prior to this Nette ! I can't wait to read it, its title is captivating my friend....so off I go to read it !!!!! *smiles* Have a great day my friend....much love, james

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 5:15:00 AM
    Well, I can well see that, she is indeed a luscious beauty:) Jag

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:48:00 AM
    Wow!This is amazing Nette.What a self portrait you have penned here.Love it!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:09:00 AM
    A marvelous writing enriched with such inspiring expressions that no heart can ever remain unmoved! Highest marks! Thank you!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:09:00 AM
    A marvelous writing enriched with such inspiring expressions that no heart can ever remain unmoved! Highest marks! Thank you!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:04:00 PM
    You inspire me Nette--what a fantastic extrapolation I never had even considered and even though the idea of doing the poem this way is special the final product is perfection!!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:59:00 PM
    Interesting self-portrait that you have penned for the contest..Reads like an interesting work for Frank to read..Thanks for the honor of your presence at my work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:44:00 PM
    lovely write, Nette - good to see you back here : )

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:24:00 PM
    A stunning piece! The self-reflection here is wonderfully stated. Life has taught you well. :) Great job!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:46:00 PM
    And she does drift quite lusciously my friend! This is an illustrious and masterful poem! You have been entertaining the free verse lately and I must say that it suits you and your style, however your rhyming poetry is very good as well! You have introduced me into many rhyming forms and I have been writing them ever since, and quite happily I might add! I've been improving ever since! I feel I'm a better poet because of you! Thank you for that Nette! What a wondrous piece this is! Great Work!!