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Her Naked Walk

. Surely you jest Your censure was cold As if you could shackle mine explosive thoughts of her naked walk Her glide-by yours plagued you whilst hern sparkle inclined mine *little did my friend know, i frequented her and her Naturist family's home often ;)

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/12/2011 7:56:00 PM

I'll bet you sparkled. The verse certainly does but with subtle grace dear James.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/19/2011 8:41:00 AM

Excellent write James....wow!!!! luv it!!!! smiles....chiquita

Skat A

Date: 1/17/2011 1:58:00 PM

humm! James, what an interesting walk of tease. cute ending. thanks for sharing~skat

Mirela Petalli

Date: 1/15/2011 8:25:00 AM

Sweet! I pictured her and her naked walk...really enjoyed it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 9:21:00 AM

hmmm, you naughty little boy!! Cute line: her sparkle caught mine! This reminds me of my naked man poem. I ought to post it sometime and no, I don't mind a favz, sweetie!! Luv, Andrea

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 1/14/2011 5:22:00 AM

the structure and language of this poem interests me

Daver Austin

Date: 1/13/2011 11:39:00 AM

I definitely am still plagued by that elapse. Seldom do you get the chance to view such a state of undress. Naughty Sir James, but explosive. Love, Dave

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/13/2011 4:13:00 AM

That lines are so true, outsiders cannot control our thoughts.. Interesting James, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2011 8:14:00 PM

Go to her now, James! Don't let anyone hold you back. If she captures your sparkle, you need to breakfree of the shackles. Love your poem, dear friend. Love you too, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2011 3:26:00 PM

Interesting thoughts penned..I am wondering about that nudity thing there..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2011 6:34:00 AM

Ohhhhh really nice write..1 thought the word "elapse" hmmm "eclipse?" anyway LOL please check out the blog photos these are all my photos and your son will like them! Light & Love a swaddled admirer!brrrrr

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/12/2011 5:18:00 AM

i'm thinking of someone. jhl

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/11/2011 7:32:00 PM

Very nice sensual poem...Jimmy

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/11/2011 1:10:00 PM

Always interesting, James..enjoyed. Always, Annalise

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 1/11/2011 9:59:00 AM

lovely poem James,how are you?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/11/2011 6:00:00 AM

Game playing is such a part of Society these days and teasing too.. luv this piece as always your writes are super unique my friend.. and anything naked stirs my bones..haha..with luv..