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Her Mother's Wedding Ring

She wears her mother’s wedding ring On a chain around her neck She wears scars on her torso Courtesy of glass cuts from the wreck She wears her pain deep inside From a loss she can’t forget She wears her guilt for surviving Not dying also she regrets He tries hard to comfort her But he also feels the loss He tries to be strong enough His own grieving is the cost He tries to help her cope And move on with her life He tries to be there for her But she reminds him too much of his wife They buried her in the rain A drunk driver was to blame They buried her far too young Their lives never again to be the same They buried her with broken hearts Through tears of suffering They buried her but saved a gift And now she wears her wedding ring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 2:33:00 PM
OMG this was a beautiful read but so sad it brought tears.Thank-you Joe for letting me win a place in your contest.Teresa
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:45:00 PM
A very moving and deserving win for you Joe. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Joe, on your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Ding-A-Ling". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:23:00 AM
congrats on your win with this wonderful entry
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:04:00 AM
Very heart-wrenching story with an important message. congratulations on your BIG WIN, Joe. Lainie
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Date: 8/6/2010 9:46:00 PM
Congatulations on your great win, Joe. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:48:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your winning poem in Paula's contest with this exceptional write.. enjoy another big win my friend.. happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:42:00 AM
I knew this heart breaker would be in the winning circle....indeed a moving and heartfelt poem it is. Well done!
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:58:00 PM
WOW Joe, what a tear jerker~very well written~enjoyed~Thanks ~Rick
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Date: 7/30/2010 4:42:00 PM
A nice story with fine display of sentiments here, with wedding as a symbol
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:18:00 PM
I agree with what you said in your blog comment. This inspired you to do an really good poem, Joe! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 7/30/2010 11:10:00 AM
beautifully told tragedy
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Date: 7/30/2010 9:44:00 AM
Wow...this is a painful story to hear, and I fear it is a true story. Beautifully told, but tragic indeed. This will do well, Joe. ~ Carrie
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