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Her Green

A whispering wind As savory fruit takes bloom Heart touching roses live

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/7/2009 5:32:00 PM
sweeeeeeeeeeetttt! Light & Love
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Date: 5/7/2009 10:38:00 AM
Nice alliteration in the first line. You have captured the essence of spring in your fine haiku Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:51:00 PM
A whispering wind, beautiful line. I left you some soup mail...Raul
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:45:00 PM
Beautiful work, loved this haiku. DN
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:44:00 PM
what a lovely whispering wind breezing softly on this site--bravo---charma
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:16:00 PM
SHORT TOUCHING SWEET REALISTIC THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENTS I JUST POSTED ANOTHER ONE THE DVILS DEMISE KEEP WRITING LOVE
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