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Our Golden Veil

She moves to kiss me from above, her body over mine, moves to brush back her hair, to keep it from my face, when, stopping her hand I draw her closer, and, nearing me, her hair falls around my head. A curtain, golden, for us, just her and me, intensifying intimacy, and concealing us, just her and me, in a golden dusk that, as it closes, disregards all the world, but her and me. Her eyes, her lips, her breath, her mouth. And me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/7/2013 8:24:00 AM
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:32:00 PM
ooh la la. now THIS is good stuff!!! why isn't it on your personal favorites list?
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Date: 4/7/2013 9:58:00 PM
This is smoldering. Whosh! J.
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:03:00 AM
Ooooh, making love under a blanket of golden hair must be the ultimate experience. I'll cancel my haircut due this week and opt for a dye - gold, of course. lol. A sensual write, for sure. You're good. :)
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Date: 3/7/2013 9:02:00 AM
Red, this is one of my favorites.. it muses me all up..LINDA
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Date: 3/2/2013 3:00:00 AM
This is just so beautiful. You understand such subtle depths of human emotion and sensuality......so......sigh :-)
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Date: 3/2/2013 3:04:00 AM
I fear you flatter me Miss Honeytip, but please don't let that stop you.
Date: 3/1/2013 9:02:00 PM
Hi Red, love this beautiful and passionate poem. the golden dusk gave it a very lovely and romantic look. always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/1/2013 12:32:00 PM
Lovely....
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Date: 3/1/2013 12:21:00 PM
Sensuous!!! Terry
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