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Her Golden Veil

She moves to kiss me from above, 
her body over mine, 
moves to brush back her hair, 
to keep it from my face when, 
stopping her hand I draw her closer
and, nearing me, 
her hair falls around my head.
A curtain, golden, for us, 
just her and me, 
intensifying intimacy, 
and concealing us, 
just her and me, 
in a golden dusk 
that, as it closes, 
disregards all the world, 
but her and me. 
Her face, 
her lips, 
her breath, 
her mouth.
And me.

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 8:24:00 AM

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:32:00 PM
    ooh la la. now THIS is good stuff!!! why isn't it on your personal favorites list?

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:58:00 PM
    This is smoldering. Whosh! J.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Red hot moments, freeze-framed. A work of art.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:03:00 AM
    Ooooh, making love under a blanket of golden hair must be the ultimate experience. I'll cancel my haircut due this week and opt for a dye - gold, of course. lol. A sensual write, for sure. You're good. :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Red, this is one of my favorites.. it muses me all up..LINDA

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 3:00:00 AM
    This is just so beautiful. You understand such subtle depths of human emotion and :-)

    OMara Avatar Red OMara
    Date: 3/2/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I fear you flatter me Miss Honeytip, but please don't let that stop you.
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Hi Red, love this beautiful and passionate poem. the golden dusk gave it a very lovely and romantic look. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:32:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Sensuous!!! Terry