Her Face

Every beautiful line Every gentle curve Your exquisite face Etched in my memory Sands of time shall not erode Nor life’s turmoil shroud in mist That image which I cherish so My sweet loves adorable face

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/5/2015 12:01:00 AM

How very romantic and sweet, Shane. This is a lovely piece. :) Great lines and smooth flow...exquisite.

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/5/2015 5:20:00 AM

Hey little Bambi, Thanks for stopping in to read my poem. It is a bit of a change of direction for the blue fish but "the mood came upon we like a tidal wave" to quote Mr Meat Loaf. How can I argue against that. Love Shane

Constance La France

Date: 8/4/2015 2:31:00 PM

Shane, I truly love your deeply romantic poem and that pic is awesome and thanks for visiting my sunset poem and comment

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/4/2015 5:53:00 PM

Thanks for stopping in BW, and for your kind words. I do appreciate. Your Sunset poem was FAB! Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/3/2015 12:53:00 PM

- What an adorable and lovely poem, dear friend Shane - Always a pleasure to read your poems - Hope all is well with you - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/4/2015 4:12:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thanks for you lovely comments, I am well and I hope you are also dear friend. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2015 8:05:00 AM

This is so beautiful and tender Shane I especially love the final stanza:-) I'm pretty excited ... later on today I'm being interviewed for on the radio about my poetry journey ... will do a blog and let you know when it will be available to listen to - its not going out live so will get edited - phew! :-) Hugs jan xx7

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/3/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thats wonderful Jan, I am so happy for you i know how much your poetry means to you. Give them a Jan Allison no holds bar version and they will be rolling in the aisles!! Good luck lttle ninja. Love Shane xxx :-)

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 8/3/2015 7:41:00 AM

Nice pen Shane....Peter

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/3/2015 9:01:00 AM

Hi Peter, thanks for stopping in and the kind words. Love Shane