Her

Cute smile, lazy talk, sparkle in her eye, beauty galore Falling, falling….don’t tell me its u I adore Love??? No I have no definition What the hell I’ll risk it, start the ignition The darkness and mystery have me urging to explore The hunger…I have to feed it more and more But hold on… I could say I love her but am not sure I do We could be friends but I’d still be lacking Or keep quiet and let it kill me inside Let her know and get crushed with rejection But… Perfection is far from any mortal, Correction betters any options for the next move, I just have to prove my affection for her, Let her feel and live in the connection that’s me and her, That my arms are equal to fine, That no line is drawn between us, And even if any it’s me protecting what is mine, And that HER…is what I want, to change to forever MINE

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/2/2015 1:23:00 AM

hello, James. . this is awesome... I love your style! "What the hell I’ll risk it, start the ignition" Love that line, made me smile! Always, Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2014 10:12:00 PM

thank you for the reply Linda

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/20/2014 1:06:00 PM

Hi James, this is such a deep powerful romantic piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2014 9:33:00 AM

James,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

James Mwangi
Date: 9/18/2014 3:51:00 PM

THANK YOU a great place to be,i already feel at home,hope i can grow and be better

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2014 3:56:00 AM

Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,James - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Mwangi
Date: 9/18/2014 3:52:00 PM

thanks for the warm welcome,

Jan Allison

Date: 9/17/2014 6:40:00 PM

I hope you find your forever love - its taking the plunge to admit your feelings but its the fear your feelings of love wont be returned which makes it such a hard thing to judge. Hugs jan xxx

James Mwangi
Date: 9/18/2014 3:53:00 PM

thanks i hope so too