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Henry the Hedgehog

On a lovely sunny morn Henry the lonely hedgehog Awoke with sun as it reached dawn As he heard some croaking frogs With birds a chirping everywhere And the frogs making their din Henry, looking here and there He gave a sleepy grin He'd woke up from hibernation All set for a brand new season Looking forward to a new adventure His waking gave him reason To say 'hello' to all around He felt real good today He has a chat on the muddy ground Then he went upon his way As he strolled along the path He saw old Polly Parrot Old Polly he did make him laugh He was chewing on a carrot It's not the fool that parrots eat But that's how Polly is They both were happy so to meet And spent their day in bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/31/2017 6:08:00 PM
It's nice to see the efforts of another lyrical poet. This poem was well crafted and rendered with good flow. Kudos to you Vera.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 12/31/2017 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert, I do like writing these little kids poems as I call them, I give them to my young granddaughter, in fact I made her up an album with all my kiddie poems and illustrated them, she love it, take care......Vera
Date: 10/24/2015 8:31:00 PM
Cute little story you got here . 7 for sure :)
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Vera Duggan
Date: 10/24/2015 11:24:00 PM
Hi Debbie thank you so much for taking the time to visit my page and for the lovely comment on this poem and thank you so much for the 7, take care........Vera
Date: 7/5/2015 12:04:00 PM
Awesome, I want to know the name of the book so I can purchase it. Wow awesome friend hugs. Eve
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Vera Duggan
Date: 7/5/2015 7:37:00 PM
Eve my dear friend as soon as we receive our copy I will send you the details, I know you can get it through LULU PUBLISHING but at the moment the site is closed down as they are having a few computer problems but as soon as this is all up and running I will send you the details, take care my dear.................Vera
Date: 7/4/2015 9:30:00 AM
Another wonderful write, a children's book I see here with a lot of uplift tails. 10+++ Hugs dear friend Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/5/2015 11:57:00 AM
Awesome, I want to know the name of the book so I can purchase it. Wow awesome friend hugs. Eve
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Vera Duggan
Date: 7/5/2015 2:29:00 AM
Yes Eve it was another addition to the childrens book which has just been published, we are very lucky to be on this small site as the woman that runs it is also a publisher,you are so kind giving me a 10+++ for this, once again my dear friend hugs back to you and please take care on the roads..................Vera..
Date: 6/4/2015 7:36:00 AM
A wonderful feeling inviting revisiting.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 6/5/2015 11:25:00 PM
Probir, thank you for visiting my page and taking the time to read my poem, I have been writing a few childrens poems to go into a book on another poetry site, glad you liked it, take care...............Vera.........
Date: 6/4/2015 6:25:00 AM
Simply charming Vera - I too have written animal poems and plan to turn one of them into a children's e book -Peter must be SO proud of all you have achieved since you picked up your pen to join him here:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2015 2:01:00 AM
Never stop posting Vera - your poems are wonderful and you need to start beleiving in your ability - i do not comment/ cut and paste for effect it is because I enjoy the works I comment on! Get more poems on here my friend and more exposure for your book - keep the dream going i too will do an e book of lenny the lizard as a tribute to my writing partner Darren watson:-) hugs jan xx
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Vera Duggan
Date: 6/5/2015 11:22:00 PM
Jan my dear friend thank you so much for the lovely comment, I can always rely on you, actually I feel so silly putting my poems on this site because they just don't match up to all the other poems people put on, but Peter always has a go at me when I say that, if it wasn't for him I wouldn't put them on, but thank you so much for all the visits you make to my site, take care my friend and love to the family........Vera..............

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