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Helpless

Helpless, broken by the bitter dreams of life a lovers soul, shattered by conflicting dreams of strife the fathers needs, outweighed by broken love God made man with arms of love to give Trapped, the broken dreams of yesterday revealed work the crucifix of life's impending doom demands, the legacy of broken souls God made man with arms of love to give Sometimes the battle's of a broken world demand a ransom men can seldom pay sometimes the locks of doors are broken wide God made man with arms of love to give from realms of broken dreams we crawl and grow the shadows of the broken heart we know yet from the depths of pain we love again God made man with arms of love to give.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/9/2014 9:57:00 AM
Bernard, Congratulations, on your win in Cyndi's "HELPLESS, KYRIELLE CONTEST." take care -LINDA-
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Date: 6/8/2014 4:03:00 AM
Bernard - I second Cyndi's comment! You most defifitely captured the feeling...I have writte quite a few that are similar to this. The only difference being each verse is five lines and the first four are monorhymes - Tim
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Date: 6/5/2014 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Bernard. Though you broke the rhyme scheme, you captured the feeling of helplessness quite well. Cyndi
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Date: 6/5/2014 2:23:00 AM
Perfect Kyrielle with apt take on the theme, congrats on a fine win, Bernard
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