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Help Me Please Lyrics To Hallelujah

I am sitting here with a broken heart Why did you leave why did we part No time to plan a special day .......did we I found my refuge here in Soup Found new friends  They  gave me hope Something to look forward to..dont I Help me please lord help me please lord  help me please lord help me pleaaaaaaaase.... Lord I try so hard to do it right Stay awake both day and night One day I will see the light......wont I Haiku makes my head spin Tanka brings me so much pain Only shapes can keep me sane ....cant they Help me please lord help me please lord Help me please lord help me pleaaaaaase. ...Lord I won some contests made me smile Encouragement was worthwhile Many went that extra mile ....for me So thank you all for helping me Keep writing poems happily My heart will mend eventually....wont it Help me please lord, help me please lord,  help me please lord help me pleaaaaaase....lord So I no longer feel alone With think of soup as being home So many friends to talk to here ...dont  I Will do my best to please them all Their time and  effort  I recall Very many thanks to all .....from me Help me please lord, help me please Lord ,  Help me please lord, help me lord help me ...lord I still sit here with a Broken heart The pain  is there cos we're apart I feel as though the healing started ...for me Maybe I will paint  again Pick up a brush not a  pen   Might paint a poem for you then....maybe Help me please lord, help me please lord,  Help me please lord. Help me pleassssse......Lord So I thank you Lord for listening to My prayers of hope asking you To find me something I could do ....  Oh my Wasn't told how great a site Someone here both day and night Never need to feel uptight ... do you Yes you helped me, when I asked you lord.    Yes you helped me When i askeddddd.....Lord. Please read about poem thank you.

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Date: 1/18/2013 9:03:00 AM
Seren ...hallelujah all the way...very well done...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2013 11:46:00 AM
Thank you David is it better than the martian one haha ....Seren
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Date: 1/18/2013 10:08:00 AM
Thanks David ...Seren
Date: 1/18/2013 8:45:00 AM
Having trouble with my lyrics...but these are so good!! Of course I found myself singing this instead of just reading. Amazed at the differences in the lyrics written so far that I've seen. Enjoyed singing along this prayer...blessings to you !!
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Date: 1/18/2013 11:47:00 AM
I know the feeling, the tune wont go away. was like that with the one i did a few months ago....Seren
Date: 1/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
Okay girl you nailed it, very touching and very, very good and I love your 2nd and 3rd verse that just lighten it that touch excellent xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2013 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Mandy ....Seren

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