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Hello Yellow

In the yellow yawning yearning still The Yellow Warbler greets the daffodil Amongst the yielding yellowish Sun As the landscape yellows its youthful run. March.03.2016 Yellow contest by Silent One

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Winged Warrior

Date: 3/5/2016 12:45:00 PM

Oh noooo...I forgot to enter it into the contest...now I'm all yellow...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2016 7:45:00 PM

I echo Broken wings, this is truly delightful and charmingly yellow!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/4/2016 7:58:00 PM

Thank you my dear Andrea...I just wish S1 would stop it with these color contests...I'm getting sea sick...I'll be vomiting colors for days LOL...god bless...^WW^

Constance La France

Date: 3/4/2016 1:35:00 AM

WW, your yellow poem is delightful, I am loving this 7 ~

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/4/2016 11:44:00 AM

Thank you my dear Wings...its always a delight to have you visit...and to see your generous comments...with respect and admiration...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/3/2016 7:47:00 PM

Very bright! I like it. I like the alliteration in the first line too. Good luck in contest. Peace my friend:)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/3/2016 8:35:00 PM

Thank you Daniel...we'll give S1 a great challenge for his contest lol...god bless...^WW^