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Hello Maria

Hello, Maria......... Hello, is that you my love Maria Please talk to me without keeping silent Your silence could make my heart break I know you are angry for what I have done But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday Hello, are you there my love Maria Please talk to me without crying Your cry makes my heart cry more than you I know you don't want to talk to me now But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday Hello, are you listening to me, my love Maria Please talk to me without have worries in your heart Your worries makes my heart melt more than you I know you don't want me any more But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam

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Bukang Liwayway

Date: 7/3/2013 11:42:00 AM

Ok, I forgive you already..LOL!! If only my love is like that....(^__^) Awesome poem about your Maria...thanks for sharing friend Ravi. cheers!! Maria :)

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/3/2013 10:29:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 10:43:00 AM

I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Ravi. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/11/2012 10:27:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Carol Appreciated

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/21/2012 8:39:00 PM

Hi Ravi,,,it looks as tho u and I don't write as much as we would like..am I right?...This poem stands out to me..It's as tho u are saying that u are just human...please forgive your behavior, whatever it was...reflective and raw...enjoyed your transparency. gwendolen

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/22/2012 4:02:00 AM

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Date: 7/22/2012 3:59:00 AM

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Date: 7/22/2012 3:55:00 AM

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