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Hello day! I'm ready for you Show me what you got Try to put a kink in my armour Just gimme your best shot Go ahead I dare you, pal Nothing can put me down See this grin across my kisser No way you can make it a frown I really don't got no negatives So how'd like dem apples It won't do you no damn good I'm a toughie for you ta grapple You thought you had me yesterday But I rebounded real quick So don't you try ta mess with me A fight is what makes me tick My happiness is here to stay today I feel it in me bones Happiness wins another round So you won't be hearing no moans! © Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 12/7/2022 2:15:00 PM
Always impressed by your effortless rhymes. And Love the positive determination! Always, Laura
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Date: 12/24/2012 2:04:00 PM
Love it Jackers love, and all the best to you over this festive season xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2012 6:36:00 AM
You are one of my true friends here on the Soup! You've made me feel at home right from the start! Love ya dear Mandy Tams! xox
Date: 12/24/2012 11:21:00 AM
Hi! I'm itching to write another Troll poem but haven't settled on the topic they'll run thru. I got my plane tickets for Jan 9th to go home... You reb up my writting motor when you write these sort of poems... I just wish my imagination would catch up... LOL... Say hi to Cathie for me. Your friend, Carol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2012 6:34:00 AM
I a-wait your next Troll episode with bated breath! Safe trip back home my dear friend Carol! Love ya! Jake xox
Date: 12/24/2012 9:43:00 AM
another good one from you Jack..just love this...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2012 6:31:00 AM
Glad you liked it, my good friend! Hope your Christmas season is jolly! Cheers!
Date: 12/24/2012 8:30:00 AM
Days are ready for you, Jack. You expect them to be good so they are going to comply! They are scared of you. Lol. Great one :) Too funny!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2012 6:29:00 AM
They better be coz I'm ready for anything that comes my way!!! Love ya!
Date: 12/24/2012 7:26:00 AM
I don't know why but this one makes me think of Poppie The Sailor Man.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2012 6:28:00 AM
One of those great old cartoons from the past! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/24/2012 6:40:00 AM
This is a very special and enlightening write my friend! I am amazed at the awesomeness of the incredible poem Jack! I really enjoyed reading this outstanding piece this morning! I want to wish you a very merry Christmas my friend, and of course a happy new year! What a delightful write! Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2012 6:27:00 AM
Thanks Russell and thanks for all the kind remarks you've sent my way since I joined in August! Merry Christmas... your friend, Jack

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