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Hello -Feels Good-

Hello Feels Good written by David William Breidenthal (D.W.Breidenthal) AN UNFINISHED SONG..... needs tons of editing!! Enjoy despite my lack of organization in this particular poem! Hello, it's nice to see you again... Greetings from my heart...promise me you won't break it apart Hello, I'd love to bring you in... We meet eye to eye....and I won't lie - it feels good to know you won't depart From my arms..... Until the end of time... Until the world stops spinning Round and round... (*Chorus* It feels good to know that someone cares It feels good to know you still abide in His light It feels good to knowthat you take away my frightening nightmares It feels good to know that your connected to my spirit like a halo It feels bad to say goodbye...when I mean to say hello... Never thought we were trapped in callous night... Hello...I never had the heart to say goodbye.... 'Cause you know...I can't handle feelin blue Hello...I'd like to know how many times I've let you down... I let you go one more time...let your soul ascend in the heartfelt sky.... ) When is it time to say hello? Is there a time to say goodbye? Could yoou let me know will your heart be released from depression? Is there a reason to say goodbye? Why do I envy you as you fly so high? How can I feel relief when it's time to say farewell to our mission? I watch you grow so old...your legend shimmering like precious gold *chorus* It feels good........etc. *bridge* Don't forget me...you were my heart's melody Don't fly too far away from me Unlock me from my misery...and treasure me like gold You astonish me with your enchanting touch Don't rush this moment, dear - you're the fire that keeps me warm Is it the right time to say goodbye When I want to say hello to this feeling of belonging... Hello...x3 you keep me waiting for so long you keep me waiting...I keep longing for your ability to take wing Can't help,but say hello There's no need to say goodbye You give me a natural high...I won't deny... I won't lie We've been going our seperate ways Don't say goodbye I haven't seen you in days...haven't seen you in a while... But, I must learn to live with or without you... When you leave my side, I'm the victim of fear *chorus* *bridge* You keep me safe from the predator You nourish my soul...You're my dreamcatcher... you're my stormy weather You thrill my eyesight...like no other... Why do I feel the need to say hello When I'm forced to say goodbye forever? Why do I feel as if you somehow know What I'm talking about? Am I still sick from the love fever? There's more to life than what meets the eye, dear friend I feel you crawling in my heart... There's a time to keep your head above the surface...who will mend Our entwined hearts? Who will erase our fears That set us apart? *chorus* Without you, I'm nothing but a dim light Without you, I'm meaningless...I'd miss our cherished delight Life doesn't overflow with beauty and insight Without you, I'm left with challenges that bite Without you, I get rather depressed...I always crave your love night after night What if hello was dead? Would it put goodbye in its death bed? What if hello embraced us with dread? Would goodbye be a cure instead?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/25/2013 6:21:00 PM
David....my money is on you....I bet you make it someday young man and I get to say I knew you when........very good......when you get famous don't forget to keep in touch with me from time to time....I love your work.....always Donna
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Date: 6/27/2013 2:52:00 AM
I'm sticking to reading and writing like all of my miserable and happy life full of turmoil and bliss and what not from time to timexD
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Date: 6/27/2013 2:50:00 AM
Wow...Donna definitely keep in touch with me...I'll keep you in mind always and forever. Ahhhwww...thankx, I'm flattered I really am. I'd like to say thank you from deep in my heart. You know what soup mail me!!! XD I won't be famous, silly... :) you are a talented writer as well! Ta-ta farewell, have yourself a superb week, dear friend and fan of mine.

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