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He'Ll Be Comin' Round the Mountain

Through inclement conditions, to haul this load En route to trek for Peace of Mind A ton in weight rides winding roads- An Everest of the Soul to climb...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Robin Davis
Date: 12/20/2013 4:59:00 PM
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Chan my friend This is interesting and unique. I will help you climb and lesson the weight on your mind and soul Thanks for another honest and great comment on my Love Condition poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/21/2013 8:03:00 AM
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Thanks so much, hon <3
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/20/2013 2:18:00 AM
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ha ha a different track to what i thought it was. . .
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/20/2013 6:30:00 PM
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Yeah, took it in a different direction, for sure lol ;)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/20/2013 2:06:00 AM
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Its difficult not to love your work. You're truly a gifted writer. Well done!
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/20/2013 6:30:00 PM
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Thanks, Mustapha; I feel the same about you, my friend :)
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 9/19/2013 4:42:00 PM
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Let's climb it together, poet!
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/20/2013 6:31:00 PM
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I appreciate that sentiment, Gerald :)

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