Held Upon a Moonbeam Sighs

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unrhymed quatrains

Visions of a way forward raising the curtains dream magic stepping into the spotlight view captivating under a harvest moon Rocked in the cradle of thoughts your the flower sweetly awakening deeply flames warmly embrace sunshine beams growing beautiful rose petals tenderly touch deeply When I trace your heart's echo kissing this soul softly within dewdrops weeping starlight tears of a breathless sigh where the sunbeams dance with brilliance Golden inside your rays honey deliciously lights up priceless perfect holding the breath for a moment love our time shining purely unique sharing

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Gary Bateman

Date: 9/13/2016 7:07:00 AM

Liam Mate!! This one's a superb Quatrain write. Beautiful, passionate, and warm as always. Keep Spilling Ink!! Best Always, Gary

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 9/12/2016 9:32:00 PM

"our time shining purely unique sharing" ......... beautiful memories resonating in the mind

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/12/2016 3:17:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^