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Heaven's Place

~~~~~~~~~~~ Heaven’s Place Rocky road Rough terrain Will I make it through? I hope it doesn’t rain Bags packed, have my gear Water, bags, everything near People passing by They don’t even say “hi” I just look up and take a look I keep climbing to the top Got to make it, cannot stop Sun is shining, no rain in sight Just keep going, that is my plight Birds flying overhead, music to my ears I look up to see what is near Soon I will reach the top, what’s up there? Just breathe in the fresh air I see it just ahead The mountains, the beauty... God’s journey was my guide So, I took it and followed it in my mind The beauty, the wonder full of grace This must be Heaven’s Place. Holly P. Moore September 2012 ~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/28/2012 1:38:00 PM
The images were beautiful. The message great! You are very talented!
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Date: 9/27/2012 7:46:00 PM
Yes,you are good! I can feel your words. :o)
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Date: 9/27/2012 11:37:00 AM
Holly, you're good - beautiful poem. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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