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Heavens Divine Song

Tranquil sounds of rain collides with concrete. Birds flee to refuge. A grey skin covers the body of the sky. The rhythm of rain beating on roofs, in sync with my heart beat. Droplets of rain trickling down window shields. Rain surreptitiously creeping through the cracks of a slightly open window. Roses at peace, their rosy red heads upwards. listening to the rains song,fervid rain. Rain embolden the land, embolden us sound of tranquility. Songs of tranquil rain,wet moist, peace,tranquil songs,calming the soul. Sounds of tranquility dropped from divinity. For this peaceful song I have an affinity. In my cool bed, I lay enjoying my companions femininity, as she embraces my masculinity. Wet rain drips,wet rain drips,falling from divinity. We kiss to the song of tranquility.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/2/2012 3:40:00 AM
GREAT WRITE MANN, I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE..........AND THNX 4 TAKING YA TYM READIN MA POEM
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:40:00 PM
I love this verse,"Roses at peace, their rosy red heads upwards. listening to the rains song,fervid rain. " Patrick
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:27:00 PM
I really enjoyed this write Elliott... Especially like the 'Roses st peace' line and concept.. Beautiful as usual... Love Diana
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:11:00 PM
Like this a lot
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:26:00 PM
Wonderful write...just extraordinary,elliot... i was drawn to the whole heavenly aspect of your world..:) huggs
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:10:00 PM
Elliott, love how you started this one and all the elements you incorporated! Simply dig this one :-)
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