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Heavenly View

Who lives in a meadow like this Who lives behind the door in the tree With a beautiful view must be like heavenly bliss "I do "said Mrs Mouse with my vast family. My neighbours the Voles are snugly fast asleep They are a bit aggressive, their areas to fight for, day and night a vigil they keep against all invaders, its a tiring chore This is a busy busy meadow amongst its vast flowers the bees and wasps hum searching for pollen for their hives The daisies, buttercups, are their water cups after the showers Insects and bugs live here  for the birds to survive.   The favourite visitors to this field are the children  Daisy chains made and worn, running and  playing ball Waiting  hungrily hoping the hamper has plenty within Food is devoured, crumbs left, a banquet for all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/14/2013 2:18:00 PM
Love this Seren, glad i've got here to read this, also ask and hope things are fine with you...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 10:55:00 PM
Hi Harry how are you . Lovely to see you...Seren
Date: 5/9/2013 8:15:00 PM
This is a beautiful write my friend! It's nice to see you back and posting again! You have enlightened me with the splendor of this incredible poem! What a detailed, descriptive piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/9/2013 8:25:00 PM
Hi Russell one I wrote in hosp. Thanks for commenting ...Seren
Date: 5/9/2013 7:59:00 PM
Lovely , even heavenly poem :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/9/2013 8:26:00 PM
Thank u my friend ....Seren

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