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Heaven Sent

The end Finely trapped in Unworthy of all things Down in this deep, dark abyss Where I rest my head at the gates of hell I look up to the lord above On my knees I cry out What have I done? The end A flash blinds the land Departing heaven she comes A flash blinds the land Rising My angel in White To save my broken soul Her beautiful wispier white face Comes close as I grasp her elegant hand Black covers all the ground below us The demons call my name No turning back Rising As I'm wondering I'll sit here with her forever As I'm wondering Will she stay?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/30/2009 6:38:00 AM
excellent Hieronymus Bosch imagery! Light & Love
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Date: 7/27/2009 10:54:00 AM
A stunning recollection of a lost soul finding its way to heaven through God's mercy. I like your writing style, Tyler. It's original, packed with images and emotion. Best Regards, Carolyn
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