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Don’t weep along side my grave, as I am no longer there.
My body rests close underneath, but my spirit’s everywhere.

Don’t weep along side my grave, as I’m those that we love.
They came to take me from this earth, for the journey to above.

You’d love it here, it’s magical. I’m healthy and I’m free.
I walk without so much pain, and cancer’s let me be.

I miss you, and it pained me to go. I left regretfully.
But now I dance until my hearts content, and my heart keeps up with me.

I have been rid of my heartache, all my pain and all my sorrow.
Now I know your grandpa will be part of my every tomorrow.
There are no bugs in my garden here, it’s plentiful and thrives.
In this magical heaven, my body and soul feel alive.

So please.
Don’t weep along side my grave, although I know it may be hard not to do.
I’m content and have been blessed & I'm always watching over you.

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  1. Date: 5/15/2010 8:14:00 PM
    I like it a lot. Check out my When You Think of Me. It's the same topic.

  1. Date: 5/5/2010 9:04:00 PM
    One of the very best I have seen here- Smiles

  1. Date: 5/4/2010 7:32:00 PM
    Wonderful. Such a warm caring message.

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 8:24:00 PM
    Aww, that's a nice write from a cool point of view. I like this a lot. Good job. Tony