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Below is the poem entitled Heartbreak which was written by poet Marugu Mburu. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Here comes my angle, 
to fight my ugly demon, 
see technicolor

In honor of Nadia Shahwan..... Thanks for your inspirational words

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  1. Date: 10/27/2009 5:18:00 AM
    Very good idea to put to pen for we all have a guardian angel just waiting to meet our needs. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 5:33:00 PM
    not sure I understand? I will read more. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/7/2009 3:44:00 PM
    Nice Haiku Erastus, kind words by Nadia>James

  1. Date: 6/7/2009 11:26:00 AM
    beautiful haiku loved it.

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 7:25:00 PM
    Well, I'm a classical Haiku writer( 5,7,5). However, I like the American style. Nadia not only gave you a nice advice but also wrote a new poem!(Ha!) Good job, my friend. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/24/2009 10:11:00 AM
    Nice haiku if considered an American haiku which decreases the number of cylabs; less that 5/7/5.. as shown up here. If you add ... Here comes my angle, to fight my ugly demon, see technicolor....(for instance). Thank you for commenting my poem.