Heart Unfolds

heart unfolds flower pick the petals make a wish forever today

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Date: 11/23/2015 3:49:00 PM

Haiku is one of my favorite forms. Short and sweet as perfumed flowers.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/23/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thanks Iris, enjoy your thanksgiving too.

Date: 11/22/2015 8:41:00 PM

Amazing Haiku ! :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/23/2015 2:00:00 PM

Thanks Gautam

Date: 9/3/2015 11:14:00 AM

this reminds me of picking petals saying "he loves me, he loves me not" :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 9/4/2015 7:33:00 AM

Thanks Linda, yes it flows from the first line.

Date: 8/11/2015 2:31:00 AM

Lovely, haiku

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/11/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Skat, your visits are always welcome..

Date: 8/2/2015 4:30:00 PM

oh, this is really lovely!!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/11/2015 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, your comments ar always greatly appreciated, especially the positive ones.