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Heart Strings

As I slowly untie the string That connects your heart with mine I reminisce about the story That once was you and I I remember on the good days I remember all the bad I remember being happy And it made me really mad For smiles were so fleeting Mostly tears is what I had I realize that love Is not a perfect thing But I can’t believe that heartache Is all you thought to bring I know now that your love Was really never there For one-sided love Never gets you anywhere The circle is now broken And I know I’ll be just fine As I let go of the string That once connected your heart with mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 1:56:00 PM
K.TENNANT, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/31/2016 12:48:00 AM
K. T., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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