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Heart Shattered - Itty Bitty

Heart Shattered- Itty Bitty As the sunset beyond a hill Heart is shattered, nothing I feel What is broken, can time mend Where to start, how do I begin And if night is darkest before dawn Can it be true joy comes in the morn Bluebirds will hum, and flowers will bloom Again I’ll find love, don't have to be soon.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 10:04:00 AM

PATRICIA , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Carl Fraser

Date: 5/26/2014 2:01:00 PM

Hi Patricia, Belated congrats on your poem, hope you find love again, blessings, Carl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 12:41:00 PM

Patricia, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 4/20/2014 6:19:00 AM

This is beautiful Patricia; must give it a high rating :) // congrats on win :) // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2014 1:15:00 AM

Patricia this is a heartfelt suberb write,, Congrats on wonderful win !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2014 12:53:00 AM

Congratulations on this little gem's win in Andrea's contest Patricia!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2014 11:56:00 PM

this is a very feeling poem and I thank you for entering my contest. Congrats for your win.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/15/2014 10:40:00 AM

A heart felt write indeed...lovely rhyme!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/14/2014 5:52:00 PM

I can really relate to the feelings that you expressed here. Your poem is very beautiful in it's simplicity. Well done, Patricia! Good luck in the contest!...Welcome to Poetry Soup!...Thank you so much for the kind comments on my poem. :)