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Heart Opens Its Eye

It's midnight again. Thoughts of you follow me like the moon, Light at my core, A dream to undress by. Clothes fall to the floor like discarded leaves of artichokes. My heart awake in beloved darkness, trembles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/20/2009 4:56:00 AM
......inspired me to write; and love.
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:55:00 AM
Every line an image... again beautifully phrased and put together.... wonderful writing !
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Date: 5/6/2009 7:27:00 AM
"Like discarded leaves of artichokes" Yes! A multi-senser. Makes the whole poem, which is o.k. otherwise too. You got it, kid! Love, daver
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Date: 4/25/2009 11:44:00 PM
compelling
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