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Heart In Hand

this earth and all your majesty starry night radiant moon walk out along the street a cosmic symphony while your hand holding mine we walk and talk passing hidden woods making prints in ocean sand trembling heart hold on tight feeling universe heart to heart hand in hand

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James Inman

Date: 10/9/2015 8:36:00 AM

Lovely piece, Anita.

Anita Sharma
Date: 10/9/2015 5:39:00 PM

hey thanku james

Daver Austin

Date: 10/6/2015 11:33:00 AM

Enjoyed this progressive style and form. Lots of talent here. Congrats, daver

Anita Sharma
Date: 10/8/2015 6:24:00 AM

thanks daver.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2015 9:23:00 PM

Hi Anita, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/10/2015 10:58:00 PM

Buddy. LOL thanks

Anita Sharma
Date: 9/30/2015 12:43:00 PM

hey thnku buddy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 1:49:00 PM

- Hey Anita :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Anita Sharma
Date: 9/30/2015 12:44:00 PM

hey thnks anne

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/26/2015 2:14:00 AM

Wonderful feeling of tender love,Welcome to the Soup.

Anita Sharma
Date: 9/26/2015 10:17:00 AM

thnks miraj

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/23/2015 2:40:00 PM

You write beautifully. . love the prints in ocean sand, Lovely.

Anita Sharma
Date: 9/23/2015 9:48:00 PM

thanks for the lovely comment..hey i am totally new here on this website..your words really meant a lot

Skat A

Date: 9/22/2015 6:57:00 PM

Anita, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anita Sharma
Date: 9/23/2015 8:19:00 AM

thanku so much skat for your kind words.