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Heart Break

Wake up to wedding bells ringing loudly All a wishful dream as I open my eyes and See the rain drops falling against the window Seeing red & blue lights outside bring the Thought could it be a wishful dream or an Eye opener to a horrifying set back in life How could that be if I was misguided I thought you were my life Gave too much emphasis on the relationship itself Or maybe put your character on a pedal stool too soon Too easy I was fooled Made me out too be a fool They do say fools fall in love so easily No excuse for my stupidity I own up too allowing A fool too catch me vulnerable, weeping, crying out Too a ear in silence like a woman yes, indeed that I am Don't be fooled by my words Now it's my time too make you out too be that fool For loosing a good one So please take a seat and endure the pain Of seeing me happy for once Were you ever mindful that maybe just maybe you Could have been the one You gained and lost all in a few months That should have sent red flags that you were The son of lust and could never be committed to one I honor your player ways but you let a real man win this one There will never be justification for your mockery of a pussy I salute to balls and facial hair my advice to you grow

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Date: 9/6/2021 2:24:00 PM
Hi Shondra, it looks like we got here about the same time. Thanks for following me, otherwise I would have continued to miss this one. It is raw and emotional. Powerful expression. Let me know if you post more.
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Date: 9/15/2016 11:17:00 PM
Shronda Wilson, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thank you guys! I have followed each and every one of you, I will pleased for a follow back. I have more poetry to come!!!
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Date: 9/15/2016 7:52:00 PM
Shronda, ,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:43:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:35:00 PM
You tell him! The things women endure... glad you came out the other side. Welcome to Soup, Shondra. Hope you enjoy its halls...
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