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Hear the Fear

Hear the Fear When the world stops its spins And Love no longer wins When the shadows condensely cast And forever’s forever last When your sweet sensuous smile Evaporates in its exiting exile When the Angels sadly sing And we feel their scorning sting When a child stops to laugh In a faceless frowning photograph When the birds slowly stop to fly In a scabrous salacious sky When lovers stop holding hands And cures for Love are their demands When our hearts stop beating Our Souls lost forever fleeting When Love no longer seems to last And future’s become the ponderous past When faith is sold in a biogenic bottle And beliefs dispensed at full throttle. Sept.28.2016 Your greatest fear - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 10/12/2016 12:31:00 PM
many congrats ^ww^ so many things to fear in every stanza - the 'scream' pic is perfect with the poem too:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2016 8:45:00 AM
Every verse has something to fear... I enjoyed this poem!! Congrats for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 10/11/2016 8:04:00 PM
Everything to fear including the fear, loved ths, congratulations on ur win.
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Date: 10/4/2016 3:07:00 PM
Yes, you brought out many things that we would certainly fear happening!! I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 9/30/2016 12:40:00 PM
the fear of love dying in all its entirety is dreadful... a most glorious write, WW... huggs
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Date: 9/29/2016 5:44:00 AM
"When a child stops to laugh In a faceless frowning photograph" you hold so many vivid fears, and they are not just fears of spiders or death. The emotional, intangible fears of humanity, it is powerful thinking.
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