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Healing Salt

the wave rolled, moving the currents in the heart, dancing to the beating drum it came to die on your shores the salt to your chapped, dark fjords

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/14/2012 11:16:00 AM
Caroline, I love the feel you have created with your Tanka.. The images swept me away in this beauty ;) hope your day has been a good one xoxo
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Date: 2/13/2012 11:15:00 AM
Evocative poem. Have you ever seen fyords? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/13/2012 9:31:00 AM
mighty powerful lines of intensity and drams Caroline.. feeling the imagery here so well .. so nice to hear from u.. as u know by now have had sevdere hand surgery..lost two fingers on right hand..so my hubby is my typing piece for now.. in therapy three times a week in Rome.. as we live in Italy for now.. till I recuperate.. so lovely to read your impressive write luv..
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Date: 2/12/2012 9:56:00 PM
Caroline,, I like the healing power salt has on the beach... ... Thank you for sharing your wonderful tanka. ;-) have your self a wonderful and fun Valentine's day~ xox~always..pd
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