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He Wishes Her a Warmth

(19/08/2011) On the sidewalk he waits For a girl with full lips No matter how sharp the cold hits And missing her is always his On the sidewalk he waits For his loved one with deep hooded eyes No matter how miserable this is He does wish her a warmth in his sighs On the sidewalk he waits For her love only he will adore No matter how bleak her kiss For to her, his money is all she waits for On the sidewalk he waits Each day, since the longing can’t be beared For for him, this is the best of other habits Though he knows, she is to be shared For Catie Lindsey's contest "Lost and Found"

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Date: 9/13/2011 9:32:00 PM
Hi Dinda, This verse builds in intensity till the last line that really gives the whole poem a marvellous personality all its own. You did a great write with this.
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:25:00 AM
Wow, what a different write... unique and sad... reminds me of a song I heard years ago but can't remember now... your fan Michael
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