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Sentinel Pinus never-ending guard Hovering fog above mirrored fish pond albeit wry through the years passed beyond he stands lookout on deck for his reward Weary years have gone by, but still proud to serve his master 11/13/2016

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Date: 11/30/2016 8:31:00 PM
Eve, really great poem and picture. Here's to all the good dogs of the world.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Doug, Hugs Eve
Date: 11/14/2016 9:34:00 PM
This is so beautiful, but when I saw the photo, wow you expressed that image very elegantly!
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Date: 11/14/2016 9:08:00 PM
Hey, I saw this image on FB I think. HOw cool you did a poem out of it. Way to be inspired, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/14/2016 9:30:00 PM
You sure did :-) I get inspired by what I see . Thank you
Date: 11/14/2016 7:24:00 PM
Absolutely a touching and beautiful poem dear, Eve! A seven my friend!
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Date: 11/14/2016 11:34:00 AM
i am moved by your heartfelt piece... just wonderful, eve.. huggs
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Date: 11/14/2016 5:35:00 AM
A stunning touch ... lovely ...
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Date: 11/14/2016 2:07:00 AM
Excellent quartrain with beautiful words. Very touching picture. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/13/2016 10:15:00 PM
Hi Eve, This is a beautiful piece in honor of your loyal companions. Well done. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/13/2016 6:36:00 PM
what a beautiful loyal companion Eve - you really should do a picture of this lovely pet:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/13/2016 9:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, Hugs Eve
Date: 11/13/2016 6:21:00 PM
"Pinus", such the handsome "sentinel" at that! Beautiful write dear poet....remember dear flower, if we all sported the same petals(writes) how boring this woul be for all who enjoy reading the variable the many poets post...??much love, james
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/13/2016 6:27:00 PM
Awe, thank you for the sentiment.. But I sure would love a Shakespearean verse
Date: 11/13/2016 5:15:00 PM
Well done Eve, the picture would be a great painting.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/13/2016 6:05:00 PM
sure would, Richard, I might just try to sketch it. Thank you for the compliment Hugs Eve
Date: 11/13/2016 3:09:00 PM
I love this Eve! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/13/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi, Hugs Eve
Date: 11/13/2016 1:56:00 PM
This is great Eve...high marks 7++
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/13/2016 6:06:00 PM
Oh thank you, Tim, made my day..

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