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He Didn'T Get the Message- Collaboration

There once was a fellow named Ted Who recently in church got wed His wife was in the mood Laying there in the nude But he was texting friends instead! He was sending text after text His new wife was feeling quite vexed 'I'm after your bone - now get off your phone .... Or I'll leave if I'm under sexed! ---- A collaboration with Jan Allison. Both Poems inspired by 'And Nothing Else Matters' By Andrea Dietrich 1st May 2016

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Date: 5/1/2016 9:34:00 AM
I LOVE IT even more now. You seem to have made the lines more consistent and Jan's adds to the humor. FAVE!!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/1/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...It was Jan who helped me make the lines more consistent, she did a great job...
Date: 4/30/2016 9:41:00 AM
hahaha. So glad to see this great limerick was inspired by my poem!!
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Joseph May
Date: 4/30/2016 10:30:00 AM
Thanks for the inspiration Andrea....hugs
Date: 4/30/2016 8:26:00 AM
ha ha ha how hilarious Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 4/30/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Jan...

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