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He Brushed

He brushed against her red hair Then moved on from there To the girl with the golden curls While tears flowed upon the ground Red hair laced between the tears Soon he tired of the gold And sought out brown What a lovely crown Then boisterously he blew on threw Now none wears a crown He is left with nothing to entertain Only snow and ice remain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/4/2010 12:25:00 PM
This is very interesting, I like it. Looking forward to reading more of your work.. Dana
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Date: 11/16/2010 5:47:00 PM
Yes, I thought this was the wind. Just wanted to be sure. And of course, also can be the other thing you said! Very good,Sara! Luv Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:42:00 AM
i like the form of this great stuff
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:54:00 PM
Very interesting, Sara. this is an anology and I am assuming personifcation. If I got it right, I think I understand it. WEll, time to get to making dinner. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:15:00 PM
Great piece! The more I read the more I see into your soul...it's beautiful...and you share it with such pride...as we all do, as for your answer to my proposal lol, to read me is to know me... hope you love what you discover, I know I am when it comes to these works of art by you... Keep them coming!
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Date: 11/14/2010 3:05:00 AM
humm! enjoyed your poem Sara, yes and i'm glad 2 be back, have anice one,..p.d.
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Date: 11/13/2010 4:55:00 PM
Unique one here for you Sara. I enjoyed your comment on my poem about the yin and yang. Yep, with Love in the middle to balance the two out, they will stay pretty tame. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/13/2010 4:30:00 PM
sad stuff...his loss
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:48:00 AM
Strong heartfelt write from such a gifted Poet as your self....always with love Michael
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