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Hay Ride

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Hay Ride



Hanging on tightly over bumps along the way
Around the barn and through the fields we sway
Young ones chatter, laugh and play

Rusty red, the autumn hills are grand
Inspire words to write about the land
Delightful afternoon , my heart sings
Enjoying the warmth that autumn brings


8/30/12

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:09:00 PM
    Another lovely poem from you. Oh, and to respond to question how does one post 5 poems a day. The answer: Vacation, Vacation, Vacation. They are too few and too short. But, your colorful autumn poem makes me long for more

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 9:13:00 PM
    enjoyed your poem. brings back memories of sitting on the top of the hay wagon:) Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 2:31:00 PM
    love this lovely acrostic, Barbara - I've never been on a hay ride but it sounds wonderful. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:22:00 AM
    Great picture - Great season...... George

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:18:00 AM
    wonderful Acrostic, Barbara, so poetic.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 1:00:00 PM
    i feel carried on a wave of melodious language and the beauty of autumn's hay-delight makes me dizzy.... well done, barbara..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:28:00 PM
    what a nice way to do an acrostic on the fall. I only had a few hay rides and they were not what I had envisioned romantically, but they were fun!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:37:00 AM
    Nice one! :) take care and God bless you, uch Love, Cindy