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Hauki 4

A simple daisy yet exquisitely formed white and gold abound My blackbird follows me around in the garden cheerful tune emits snowdrop so lovely you poke up your head through snow glistening snow white a robin redbreast tugged at a juicy worm he was so pleased

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2013 4:56:00 PM

Reads as if one is in early spring...Enjoyed reading your Haiku...Thanks for stopping by..That was one smashed rattler..That morning there were two armadillos and a rattlesnake in the road dead..The buzzards had a choice of which restaurant they would dine that day..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/20/2013 11:36:00 AM

lol sounds gruesome ty Sara spring would fit well Shadow x smiles

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/19/2013 9:58:00 AM

I think Mother Nature is bowing in your dedications to her today. Gorgeous job!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/19/2013 4:48:00 PM

hi Drake what a lovely thought nice to see you stopping in Shadow x smiles