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Harvest Reflections

The rustling gold heads Below a beautiful sky, Just rattling away.

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Sean Kelly

Date: 1/8/2009 2:08:00 AM

Perfect 5~7~5 Haiku , Raul which captures the moment .... Well done ..

Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/30/2008 12:37:00 PM

This is such a lovely poem. It creates such a nice feeling. My best wishes always. Love Robin

Daniel Neal

Date: 11/24/2008 3:24:00 PM

I can imagine the wheatfield you painted with this lovely haiku.

Date: 11/23/2008 1:21:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification in this haiku. Thank you for sharing it with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/19/2008 6:31:00 PM

Lovely imagery here. An excellent haiku. Thank you Raul for such a thoughtful comment. Love, Shar

James Foulk

Date: 11/19/2008 2:00:00 PM

a beautiful piece you wrote, so warm and colorful. Michael Torres asked me to read some of your poetry and you do have some talent, keep writing my friend.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 11/19/2008 1:23:00 PM

this is a nice haiku loved the title