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Hardly Trite For Being Cliché

Stuck in my head, All of those tears I've shed, So many times I've bled, Now you're here in their stead. Missing your hazel eyes, As soft as the skies, I'll think of you tonight; You're all thats on my mind. A love like ecstasy; Who knew It'd set us free? Others are so soon to disavow, But just look who's laughing now. Now I implore you To ignore the disarray Of all things fake surrounding us Because we're whats real today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2010 8:37:00 AM
this poem really is great! i have readit a thousand times lol, i really love how the last line pulls it together perfectly. Jo
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Date: 1/13/2010 10:14:00 AM
I LOVE THIS ONE! makes me think of my hubby =)
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Date: 1/5/2010 11:18:00 AM
Awwwwwww. Your poems are soooo sweet. Love to see a guy in touch with the emotion of love!
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:35:00 AM
Very nice write here my friend... Great flow and emotion all in one....Well done....Taz
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