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Hard Times

When I look back to when times were hard, When all of us kids used to play in the yard. When Mum had no money to give us a treat, When she needed it to put shoes on our feet. When we sat and watched the other kids eating, When all we could hear was our tummies rumbling. When tea was beef dripping on toasted bread, When this was all Mum could give us before bed. When morning came we got more of last nights tea When we were at school our dinners were free, When our Dad had left us for reasons beyond me. When the hard times came I never did know, When Mum raised us 5 kids the best she knew how. When sweets were a surprise if they came, When, to us kids life was still just a game. When I grew older, in my teenage years When I realized why Mum shed those tears. When I found out that all the love I missed, When I couldn't remember if I had been kissed. When Mum finally died I was a grown up Dad When the hard times came, though which we had come. When I look back and remember I was glad we had Mum. For Christina Timperley 1908-1994 © Dave Timperley 18 September 2016

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Date: 9/18/2016 8:29:00 AM
Very emotive tribute to your mother Dave. To me this is another one of those "walk a mile in my shoes" kinda stories. Very sad bit sweet because it's done with love.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 9/18/2016 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, nice comment. God Bless. D.
Date: 9/18/2016 6:30:00 AM
Touching but lovely ... Eyes spontaneously shut at the end in the shared tribute ...
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Dave Timperley
Date: 9/18/2016 8:06:00 AM
Do you know what style this is if you stat each line with the same word the dictionary says Anaphora but it is not one of the choices on here. D.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 9/18/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Probir, when I proof read it through, the last lines got to me too. God Bless. D.

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