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Hands and Feet

Mommy, Mommy I have made prints of my little hands and feet. So you can remember me when I was so small and sweet. The hands that held yours so tight, held you tight for hugs and that fold to pray. The feet that went pitter patter through the house all day long. I will continue to grow big and strong, but always remember MY LOVE for you will last my whole life long. By Heather Freeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/15/2016 11:18:00 PM
Heather, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2016 7:56:00 PM
Heather Freeze, ,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:45:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/14/2016 8:46:00 PM
Cute as all get out. They do grow so quickly. My daughter is seven. Seems like yesterday I was carrying her on my hip. Welcome to soup, Heather. It may take some time for you to manoeuver around the site, but you'll get the hang of it in no time. You can find poems to read under the Member Poets/ Poems links (column on your left) In no time, people will be reading your work. Cheers.
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