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Hand of Breeze

If the breeze has along and soothing hand Do touch my bank account with a magical wand Let the debtors of my mind! Beach I want, to unwind! My feet again to burry in sand

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 11/1/2016 1:51:00 AM

A very relatable poem.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 11/2/2016 4:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Afzal.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2016 9:34:00 PM

Oh yes, I want that beach too, Abosede. Can you bring me one like magic??

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/30/2016 1:07:00 PM

LOL! Alright, let's just hope the magic works . It's always nice having you on my page

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/28/2016 5:04:00 PM

Bring on the beach!

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/30/2016 1:05:00 PM

Yes! Bring it on Richard. LOL! Thanks friend.

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2016 8:59:00 AM

This was nice, I'd like to see and feel the same thing.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/30/2016 1:00:00 PM

Thanks Chris...alright, LOL, I hope you feel same thing. Thanks for reading Chris.