Hammock

to laze upon the sea shore strung between the balmy trees one feels a part of heaven touch the stars caress the moon © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Date: 10/22/2012 10:34:00 AM

I see that this took a winning place in a contest..Congrats!! This definitely sounds like a winning poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2012 11:08:00 PM

Hi Harry, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2012 5:50:00 PM

Wow!!Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2012 10:19:00 AM

yes yes yes, THIS one scored HIGH and it was so well deserved. I just loved this one, harry. Belated congrats for your win.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/14/2012 7:35:00 PM

Harry, congratulations on your well deserved win! Terry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/14/2012 3:03:00 AM

Many Congratulations Harry for this win. An honour to share this position with you.

Kash Poet

Date: 9/13/2012 12:17:00 PM

Love this one very much Harry!Congrats on your top win!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/13/2012 6:10:00 AM

Wow, if I could dive into your poem, I would, Harry! To laze upon the beach caressing the moon, sounds like heaven to me. Congrats on your super first place win! Hugs, Rhonda

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/13/2012 3:11:00 AM

Bravo on your First place win in this contest Harry. Congratulations!!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/12/2012 1:59:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 9/12/2012 11:52:00 AM

Hi Harry, excellent, I'm there in the hammock adoring the night sky with you. Congratulations on your win!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2012 9:38:00 AM

i feel like i'm suspended in anination, harry.. wow!.. congrats on your top win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Debra Squyres

Date: 9/12/2012 9:04:00 AM

Such a relaxing scene...ahhhh !! Congrats on your win !!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/12/2012 6:44:00 AM

To touch the stars and the moon as I sit in this poetic hammock...ahhhhh, how astonishing, Harry...You got a delightful image here! Congrats friend! gwendolen

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/12/2012 6:13:00 AM

ohho congratulations :) great poem!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/12/2012 6:02:00 AM

Stunning win harry big congratulations oh to be swinging there now xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2012 5:26:00 AM

Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Harry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2012 4:53:00 AM

way to go harry luv .. big congrats on first place for a sweet sensational write ...but .. u r always first place with me my friend ..

Len Gasun

Date: 9/12/2012 1:08:00 AM

My hearty congratulations on your GRAND WIN my dear friend, Harry!! hugs:)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/11/2012 11:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win harry!!! cheers!!!!!!!! (^_^)

Robert Johnson

Date: 9/10/2012 2:47:00 PM

Up here in minnesota, it sounds pretty good. hhhhm.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/10/2012 9:26:00 AM

h! how sweet it is. Excellent one, enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/10/2012 4:33:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Harry. Heading to the Atlantic shore tomorrow to work for the day. I'll think of you and your poem while checking out the waves splashing against the shore.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/9/2012 6:38:00 PM

this poem creates such a tranquil mood - nice job!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/9/2012 5:28:00 PM

Complete peace! Perhaps a comma between stars and caress? Just a thought..love it. BG